Chason #10 TS

Date/Time: February 28th, 12:00pm

Location: CIES building

Topic/Skill: Research paper

Feedback provided to tutee: I reviewed Sultan's lengthy research paper. It was very well written, so my comments were mostly questions about APA format citation rules and a few small things. My only critique on the work as a whole was the repetitive nature of a few sentences/expressions ("this is why _ is so important in the study of _") but regardless it still read like a well done academic publication. 

Lesson(s) about tutoring and/or the tutee you learned: Length limits on written assignments are a must!! Apparently Sultan initially wrote something like 8 pages, and I read what he had cut down to about 4. The instructor was very surprised at his initial submission length!

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